What you will learn
- Follow the writing process: plan, draft, revise, edit, share.
- Plan a story with a character, a setting, a problem, a climax and an ending.
- Revise the meaning before you edit the spelling.
A story for this lesson is a short piece with one main character, one setting, one problem and an ending that answers the problem. You do not need ten pages. One good page is enough.
Writers do not pour a perfect page out in one go. They plan, draft, revise, edit and share. Planning is thinking. Drafting is getting the words down. Revising changes the meaning: the order, the missing climax, the unclear ending. Editing fixes spelling, capitals and punctuation. Sharing is reading it to someone or publishing it in class.
Revise before you edit. There is no point polishing a sentence you are about to cut.
Plan on the mountain
Write five notes. Who is the character, and what do they want? Where and when is the setting? What problem gets in the way? What is the climax, the turn? How does the ending answer the problem?
Use a setting you know, such as a school yard, a market or a beach, so the details can be real. Invent the problem. You do not have to tell a private family story.
If you cannot say the problem in one sentence, the plan is not ready.
Worked example 1
Plan a story about a split mango bag.
Show me how
Character: Nia, who wants to carry the mangoes home.
Problem: the bag splits at the stall.
Climax: she catches the rolling mangoes. Ending: the seller thanks her and the fruit is safe.
Draft and revise
A draft can be messy. Leave gaps rather than stopping for ten minutes on one spelling. When the draft exists, read it as a reader. Can you find the problem? Is there a turn? Does the ending match?
Revise by adding one sensory detail, cutting a sentence that wanders, or moving the climax so it is not in the first line.
Ask a partner one question only: “What is my character trying to do?” If they cannot answer, the draft needs a clearer want.
Worked example 2
A draft ends before the mangoes are safe. What kind of change is needed?
Show me how
The problem is still open.
This is a meaning change, so it is revision, not just editing.
Add an ending that shows the fruit is safe.
Edit, then share
Editing is the surface. Capitals, full stops, speech marks, they was, and spellings you know. Read the draft aloud. Your ear will catch missing words.
Then share. A classmate, a parent or a class book is enough. Sharing is not the same as posting a private story on a public site. Ask before you share someone else’s life.
Keep the plan notes. They show the process, and a teacher may want to see them.
Watch out! A common mistake
A common mistake is to edit spellings first, then discover the story has no ending. Revise the story, then edit the lines that stay.
Try it
TRY ITStory process lab
Let’s practise
Work each one in your copybook. Open Hint if you are stuck, then open Show answer to check.
1. Name the five steps of the writing process in order.
Hint
Plan comes first. Share comes last.
Show answer
Plan, draft, revise, edit, share.
2. Why revise before you edit?
Hint
Think of a sentence you might cut.
Show answer
Do not polish words you are about to delete. Fix the meaning first.
3. What five notes belong on a story plan?
Hint
Who, where, and the mountain.
Show answer
Character, setting, problem, climax and ending.
4. What is the problem in the mango story?
Hint
The bag.
Show answer
The bag splits.
5. What must the ending do?
Hint
Think of the problem.
Show answer
It must answer the problem.
6. Is adding a missing capital revising or editing?
Hint
Does the plot change?
Show answer
Editing.
7. Is moving the climax revising or editing?
Hint
Does the meaning change?
Show answer
Revising.
8. Why keep the plan notes?
Hint
A teacher may ask.
Show answer
They show the process, not only the final page.
Quiz
Lesson quiz: 10 questions
Answer every question, then press Check my answers. Score 8 or more to earn the Story Planner badge.
Writing a Story: The Writing Process: worksheet
Name: ____________________ Date: ______________
Part A: Let’s practise
1. Name the five steps of the writing process in order.
2. Why revise before you edit?
3. What five notes belong on a story plan?
4. What is the problem in the mango story?
5. What must the ending do?
6. Is adding a missing capital revising or editing?
7. Is moving the climax revising or editing?
8. Why keep the plan notes?
Part B: Quiz
1. Which order is the writing process?
(a) Plan, draft, revise, edit, share
(b) Edit, plan, share, draft, revise
(c) Share, edit, plan, draft, revise
(d) Draft only
2. Revising mainly changes what?
(a) The meaning and shape of the writing
(b) Only one spelling
(c) A page number in an index
(d) A silent letter
3. Editing mainly fixes what?
(a) Spelling, capitals and punctuation
(b) The whole plot from scratch only
(c) The glossary of another book
(d) A fluency race
4. Which note is a story problem?
(a) The bag splits.
(b) The child has a name.
(c) The day is Saturday.
(d) A noun is proper.
5. Which ending answers the mango problem?
(a) The fruit is safe.
(b) The bag splits and the story stops.
(c) She lists prepositions.
(d) She never reaches the stall.
6. Adding an ending is which step’s kind of work?
(a) Revising
(b) Only editing
(c) Only sharing
(d) A modal
7. Capitalising Mayaro is which kind of work?
(a) Editing
(b) Revising the climax
(c) Planning the character
(d) Personification
8. You should edit every spelling before you know the ending.
True or False? Circle one: True / False
9. A partner question that helps a story is which?
(a) What is the character trying to do?
(b) How many syllables are in yesterday?
(c) What is a jetty?
(d) Which letter is silent?
10. Sharing a story about someone else’s private life needs what?
(a) Their agreement, or a change so it is clearly invented
(b) A bandwagon
(c) A chart of sardines
(d) A contraction
Answers (for the adult)
Part A
1. Plan, draft, revise, edit, share.
2. Do not polish words you are about to delete. Fix the meaning first.
3. Character, setting, problem, climax and ending.
4. The bag splits.
5. It must answer the problem.
6. Editing.
7. Revising.
8. They show the process, not only the final page.
Part B
1. (a) Plan, draft, revise, edit, share
2. (a) The meaning and shape of the writing
3. (a) Spelling, capitals and punctuation
4. (a) The bag splits.
5. (a) The fruit is safe.
6. (a) Revising
7. (a) Editing
8. False
9. (a) What is the character trying to do?
10. (a) Their agreement, or a change so it is clearly invented
Recap
- Plan, draft, revise, edit, share.
- A story plan has character, setting, problem, climax and ending.
- Revise meaning before you edit the surface.
- The ending should answer the problem.
Words to know
- plan
- Notes made before the draft.
Example: The plan named the problem. - draft
- The first full try at the writing.
Example: The draft was messy and useful. - revise
- To change the meaning or shape.
Example: She revised the ending. - edit
- To fix spelling, capitals and punctuation.
Example: He edited the capitals last.
Try it at home
- Plan a one-page story with five notes, then draft it. Revise the ending before you edit.
- Ask someone “What is my character trying to do?” and change one sentence if they are unsure.
- Keep the plan and the draft in your copybook so the process is visible.
Test tips
Tips for class tests
- If a test asks for a story, spend a minute on the five notes before you write.
- Check that the last paragraph solves the problem.
- Leave a line for editing so the draft stays readable.
For parents and teachers
After this lesson, your child should be able to:
- Say the five process steps in order.
- Plan a story with one problem and a matching ending.
- Point to one revision and one edit on a draft.
Do not rewrite the story for them. Ask questions: What does the character want? What gets in the way? How is it solved?
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Course: Standard 3 English
Updates
2026/11/06
– Published this lesson and linked the previous and next lessons.
– First draft of this English lesson, with a hands-on lab, practice, quiz badge and worksheet.
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